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Data2048, October 25th, 2009, 1:35 am ( Reply )

= D - I REALLY LIKE THIS PAGE.

I spent a long time working on it ._.

Kudos to those who can correctly guess what happened at the end XD

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Im guessing he pulled something out of the wrong place like his preview vid and now rocks are fallin on him :P Awsome page Data

posted by ragnarocker on October 25th, 2009, 1:57 am





 
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I think it caved in or the ground gave way

posted by GreyouTT on October 25th, 2009, 9:26 am





 
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Having read the book, I know that he actually ran into a open cavern.
Having no rock infront of him, he fell on his face.
At least in this version. :p

posted by Eternal Cry on October 25th, 2009, 10:03 am



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ah, i love this part =D

posted by tahulover96 on October 26th, 2009, 8:24 pm



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Cool. The artwork is already noticably better. And more characters have entered, too!

posted by Diamond (Guest) on November 7th, 2009, 4:18 pm



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Sup. I'm a big fan of Bionicle and you really stayed true to the story (dispite them being humans... which is awesome by the way) so... is Jaller going to be in the comics? I think he's really cool. Also, are you going to redo the prequal series with the Toa Metru and stuff? Also, I heard that you're going to make it so the Toa Mata and the Toa Nuva are two versions of themselves or something. Is that the same with the Turaga and the Toa Metru? What about the Toa Inika and the Toa Mahri? Just wondering... I also might as well comment on the picture too. IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is seriously expert stuff. I'm suprised no one has noticed how good you are at drawing. You could seriously be famous. You made Onua look really cool with his claws and stuff. It's like Fredy, lol. Now I can't imagine Onua without glasses. So... yeah... Fear Riku!

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 15th, 2009, 11:44 pm





 
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I'm afraid I can't reveal too much about future plots =]

but a little something about the Toa Nuva and Mata... once I get to the side story, you'll see what happens with that plot. I have it all worked out =]

I'm glad to hear that you enjoy it!

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 8:16 pm



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I am DEFINATLY enjoying this. I thought of something like this before but never got to do it. (My drawing sucks) So, yeah, I'm finding this REALLY cool. Tahu is my favorite character so far. He's really cool. Can't wait to see him more.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:26 pm





 
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aw, thanks =]

I'm drawing up spoiler art, but I'm not sure if I'll ever post it on the comic site.... I might post it on my art site, but I dunno.

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:27 pm



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Cool. Can't wait. I do have one question though. Why does Onua wear the green glasses?

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:31 pm





 
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heehee, you'll see. It's explained in the next page actually... which I've been working on... .... kinda.... >>

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:32 pm



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Wait a minute... I think I know why now. This also fits with the story, too. His eyes are sensitive to light so... maybe it's to protect his eyes???

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:36 pm





 
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....maaaaaaaaaybe.....

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:36 pm



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lol

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:38 pm



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I've been looking around the site and found some info on a guy named Ryuu. Is he a dark version of Tahu? There were anti-toa in the first Bionicle book so I was just wondering who this guy was.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:41 pm





 
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That'll come MUCH later in the comic =]

I'll have to update Ryuu's bio sometime... the story has changed a bit since I wrote that ^^U

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:41 pm



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I see... so... um... I ran out of questions..........

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:43 pm





 
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you know, you can send me an email sometime if you want if you have any random questions.

if you like spoilers and all that, feel free to drop an email or something. I'll fill y'a in with whatever you want to know =] But it might ruin the story...

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:45 pm



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Well... all I really want to know is if Jaller is going to be in the comics any time soon.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:46 pm





 
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well, its still the very beginning of the comic. Once it gets going (which it will be... around... chapter.... ... something), he'll appear with Takua.

He's very... focused on his duty as the Captain of the Guard, and shows a LOT of respect for Tahu (which drives Takua a bit insane).

You'll see =]

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:48 pm



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lol. Sounds a lot like the original Jaller that I've grown to like.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:49 pm



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Sounds like Takua is in it too. That means Takanuva! YAY!!!!! Goldy Man!

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:52 pm



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Oh... my... God! Wh- what! H- how is this possible! I just saw an image you made on deviantART and saw that Tahu... and... Gali... and they... and they had... How!!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:55 pm





 
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pft, that's a REALLY old picture. I think I might change that whole part to the story... I can't say what I'm planning on doing, but things won't go that far ^^U

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 10:58 pm



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But How!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

posted by Fear Riku is Freaked Out! (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 10:58 pm



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I mean, don't get me wrong, it's a good plot twist but it was just a little shocking to see.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:01 pm



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Ok, really shocking...

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:01 pm





 
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well... ._.

they're not fully robots. They wear armor... ._.U

I dunno. As I said, I'm changing it, b/c technically... I'm not liking that part of the story. I created it years ago, and it was part of the original plot that I had created (which was the main reason why I created the comic in the first place), but I got a lot of complaints saying that the comic wasn't close enough to the original story, and I was getting a little annoyed by my own story too, so.... I changed the majority of it and started over. So, that part is going to disappear.

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 11:01 pm



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Ok... Trying to get out of shock. lol

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:03 pm





 
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don't worry about it too much ^^U

I get the same reaction from a lot of other people. Try to keep in mind that the picture was drawn... in... 2006? Its pretty old now =]

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 11:04 pm



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Lol, ok. Also, I saw another really cool image with the toa but there was a person in the reflection of a mirror. Was that Mata-Nui?

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:06 pm





 
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uhm... probably.

but ever since the "Legend Reborn" came out, I'm trying to change wat Mat looks like (ever so slightly)... I try to make the characters fit the voice.

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 11:07 pm



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Good point, considering he's 5 million feet tall (seriosly, he literaly is. Yeah, I'm a Bionicle geek. I know stuff like that.) Maybe the version that you made in that picture could be him on Bara-Magna. Just a thought. No need to put good ideas to waste.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:10 pm





 
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well... when I created the human version of him (The first time), I actually thought of him having this 'vessel' like body that he would use when he wanted to sit and chat with the Matoran.... but hey, that's a good idea too. The only problem is that the version I created... well... he's wearing a very formal outfit... ^^U Oh well. Mat's a graceful fighter XDD

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 11:12 pm



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lol. True that. The vessel idea is cool, too.

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:14 pm





 
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^^

anyways, its getting late... so Imma head off to bed. I have school in the morning =_=

posted by Data2048 on December 16th, 2009, 11:15 pm



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kk

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:15 pm



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I'll try and tune in from time to time. Can't wait for the new page. =)

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:17 pm



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Well, I think many questions have been answered today. lol

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 16th, 2009, 11:17 pm



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Well, there's probably no one on right now but... if this chapter has Kopaka, Onua, and Pohatu, does that mean that the next chapter will be Gali and Lewa?

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 17th, 2009, 6:28 pm



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So... Tahu's gonna have a crush on Gali?

posted by Fear Riku (Guest) on December 17th, 2009, 6:29 pm



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