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21 Mar 2008 04:41 pm

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Data2048, 21 Mar 2008 04:44 pm

goodie!

Phew, now that Kokoro's part is finished, I get to move on to the fun part. Huzzah.

Ya'll should know who Kokoro is by now. He's not technically an "alter-ego"... but he could be labeled that. ;)

Now guys... if you want to email me, please PM me instead. My inbox gets cluttered with all sorts of chain letters and crap, so thats why I'm hesitant of giving out my email to people.

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comic king, 21 Mar 2008 05:13 pm


oh... my... god.... you are a god. i loved the Bionicle comic. >< i actually have every issue. It looks really good so far. I can't wait to see how it goes once you run out of comics to base it off of. :3

Data2048, 21 Mar 2008 05:14 pm


haha ^^ I'm actually pretty much going off what I know for the beginning and end; the whole middle parts gonna be pretty... well... changed.

comic king, 21 Mar 2008 05:16 pm


when I get back home on monday, i'm gonna reread it. >< if you hit any blank spots where you can't remember, don't hesitate to ask me. :3 I was so upset when they discontinued it.

Data2048, 21 Mar 2008 05:17 pm


I have the books, so I'm living off of those ;)

Reign of Chaos, 21 Mar 2008 05:20 pm


I've got the books, as well. I just wish that the books covering the Mata Nui storyline were a bit more into detail. I mean, a single book to take the whole year? They never put very much detail into them until Greg Farshtey took over...

Data2048, 21 Mar 2008 05:20 pm


yeah I know D: so sad...

comic king, 21 Mar 2008 05:23 pm


D: I just found out that there's still a Bionicle comic. It's called Bionicle: Ignition now. >< now I have to track them down.

Tahulover96(not a guest!) (Guest), 26 Mar 2008 07:59 pm


by the way...an artahka is a place of peace for matoran. D: duh.

hobsyllwin (Guest), 26 Mar 2008 08:23 pm


So let me get this straight, Data. There's Tahu, then there's Kokoro, and Kokoro is Tahu's "other self". Now, with those points, I've have a guess: Tahu is the host of another soul, not just his own...right?

Data2048, 26 Mar 2008 08:26 pm


close ^^

Kokoro IS Tahu. Going back to what Greg F said about the Toa, the appearence they have is a "mask" and covers what they really are...

I'll explain more as the comic progreses

hobsyllwin (Guest), 27 Mar 2008 05:34 pm


What? @.@ Ya, you DO need to explain. By the way, I've been trying to email you lately,... and aparently you haven't got them. What's this "PM me" thing anyhow? (I'm new to the text slang and such.) Could you explain that to me? Maybe... give me an Email about it,... perhapse? <)

Data2048, 27 Mar 2008 05:35 pm


PM = private message.

if you're a member of the site, you have access to sending private messages to the authors.

hobsyllwin (Guest), 27 Mar 2008 09:36 pm


We have a problem: I'm not a member. ^^U If I'm not mistaken, my emails aren't getting to you for some reason. How am I suppose to get my information to you?
I was hoping to... *sigh* show my story to someone who likes this stuff as well as I do.
I don't know what to do now, Data. Do you think it would be easier to tell you where to go on THIS site or IS there another way around this?
Email me your answer if you like.
-hobsyllwin loging out-

Data2048, 29 Mar 2008 05:25 pm


I'd rather keep my email a secret, so please stop telling where they can find it.

Chris Orr (Guest), 29 Mar 2008 11:44 pm

Reccomendation
Sorry about the double post, I am having trouble figuring out how to post on deviantart. Anyhow just wanted to ask you this.
Have you considered writing on Fanfiction.com? From what I have read in ur fics so far, you rival fanfiction.com's
Saya_Moonshadow and that is sayign somethign as she is one of the top ranking bionicle fanfic writers, if you start writing on fanficion.com let me know and I get a few big names to keep an eye out for your stories. Saya_Moonshadow and Shay_Moonsilk have some competition and I think I like your stories more (note the I think) OH yeah the the manga part, the shadow toa officially dont show up until the toa get inside kini nui.

Data2048, 29 Mar 2008 11:47 pm


eh-hehe.... ^^U

I normally don't write fan-fics...

I have a story of my own going on right now, so I should stay focused on that ^^

If I have time (and possibly the creativity), I would join the site...

Skycat (Guest), 31 Mar 2008 01:54 pm

Question
I like it and find it interesting but who is this Seika guy and what is his importance in the story. If you need any help, I am actualy trying to write a book and could give you a few ideas if you want them.

Data2048, 31 Mar 2008 03:46 pm


Seika will appear through out the manga... very rarely though. His importance will start to show then.

And technically, none of the guys here are Shadow Toa.... those come much later

Skycat (Guest), 01 Apr 2008 01:43 pm

Good
That's good, I'm very curious to what you are going to have happen next.

tigerpelt (Guest), 01 Apr 2008 07:12 pm

uhhh...new person!
I'm new...and I just read the manga you wrote...and I basically hve no idea what's going on...can anyone spare time to explain? Please?

Data2048, 25 Apr 2008 04:26 pm

ugh
okay... to sum up what happened...

Kokoro = Tahu

Tahu's pretty much lost on Mata-Nui and has no clue what he is doing. Kokoro tried explaining what his duty was, but Tahu rejected the information and threw a temper tantrum.

Thus, the story begins.

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