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17 Oct 2007 07:39 pm

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Data2048, 17 Oct 2007 07:40 pm

ish tired

yeah... sorry 'bout the delay. Been really busy and such...

get the fifth page done as soon as possible.

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User Comments:

Damang (Guest), 17 Oct 2007 09:44 pm


Lol, who ever knows their purpose, awake or asleep?

ARD-X, 18 Oct 2007 04:13 am

:o
Take that mask!

Guest, 23 Oct 2007 11:09 pm


Your art is good, but I think if you ever want to expand your talent you need to work on your storytelling. Study up on some of the classics, take a few classes on it if you must. Really just reading a lot of varied and interesting works will help you out.

Data2048, 24 Oct 2007 08:03 pm

(To Guest)
Yeah, I started writing the story after the first few pages. I did realize that I needed the plot before the art. ^^U

Don't worry, the story (will hopefully) make more sense afterwards.

SuperNathanNuva (Guest), 14 Nov 2007 01:26 pm

Yay!
Great job! Feels like 2001 alright! Oh, and about the Mata Nui dies thing, I just learned he is revived by Matoro. But Matoro dies for it. So, yeh, it's still sad either way. One Question: Ever been to Bzpower? You know www.bzpower.com? It's a great bionicle web site with forums. Just thought you should know. :)

Hobsyllwin (Guest), 18 Dec 2007 01:00 pm

Sands of Time
Hey there! I just want to say that your art style is amazing! For over a month, however, production suddenly stoped. What happened?! Please get more pages in soon. I've been on this site a few days a week, hoping to find another page. What ever you do, don't stop!

I like...no, I love it. Keep it up. I support your progress. And as a bionicle fan, I'm rootn' for ya', every step of the way!

This is Hobsyllwin signin' off...for now.

Masterweaver, 26 Dec 2007 09:00 am

Fan reaction
Before you go any further!

Yes, I am a bioncloid, and I know the story inside out and under. Therefore, I feel I must inform you that the Toa Mata were guardians of SOMEWHERE ELSE before they came to Mata Nui. I'm not saying where, that would be spoiling, but try to keep the continuity.

Don't get me wrong, it's a good comic, but Tahu is at least a thousand years old. Albeit, he spent most of that time in a coma, but...

Data2048, 04 Jan 2008 08:07 pm

Reply to Masterweaver
Yeah, I knew all that.


The thing is, I changed a little bit of the Toa's past.

Later on, the Toa and Toa Nuva become two seperate people (rather beings), so the Toa Nuva have all that stuff going on to them while the Toa Mata have my story going on...

it's weird how I think things through. So... yeah. ^^U

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