Take that mask!

posted by ARD-X on 18 Oct 2007 04:13 am

Yeah, I started writing the story after the first few pages. I did realize that I needed the plot before the art. ^^U

Don't worry, the story (will hopefully) make more sense afterwards.

posted by Data2048 on 24 Oct 2007 08:03 pm

Before you go any further!

Yes, I am a bioncloid, and I know the story inside out and under. Therefore, I feel I must inform you that the Toa Mata were guardians of SOMEWHERE ELSE before they came to Mata Nui. I'm not saying where, that would be spoiling, but try to keep the continuity.

Don't get me wrong, it's a good comic, but Tahu is at least a thousand years old. Albeit, he spent most of that time in a coma, but...

posted by Masterweaver on 26 Dec 2007 09:00 am

Yeah, I knew all that.


The thing is, I changed a little bit of the Toa's past.

Later on, the Toa and Toa Nuva become two seperate people (rather beings), so the Toa Nuva have all that stuff going on to them while the Toa Mata have my story going on...

it's weird how I think things through. So... yeah. ^^U

posted by Data2048 on 04 Jan 2008 08:07 pm