» Comics - Story Thus Far *promo* - July 31st, 2007, 1:52 pm

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Data2048, August 2nd, 2007, 9:45 pm ( Reply )

Uh, yeah - I'll redo this later... I have to post the Cover before I should post this... but oh well.

I need a manga colorer...

Advertisement, September 22nd, 2017, 5:34 pm ( Reply )

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  Some Critique ( Reply )

I realize this page is very old. But I still want to point out some things. First of all, I see some spelling mistakes, ('praied' as an example, is spelled 'prayed').

However the mean thing I want to point out, is that this page was confusing, at first it talks about "the people" in third person, then it talks about them in first person. Then things get confusing, "We were forced to take his every word..." I can't figure out what you mean by that, were they enslaved? Or just watched?

posted by JL (Guest) on February 27th, 2008, 9:32 pm





 
-reply to JL- ( Reply )

Yeah... this is veeeery old.

I ended up changing a few things, so this page actually should be deleted...

posted by Data2048 on February 27th, 2008, 9:33 pm



  ... ( Reply )

ok spelling mistake- you put 'learder' not 'leader'

posted by tahulover96(not a guest!) (Guest) on March 1st, 2008, 11:02 am





 
this is very cool so far! ( Reply )

Very very awesome looking!

posted by Idene on March 20th, 2008, 10:31 pm



  Mapa-Rui? ( Reply )

Named after Rapa-Nui?

posted by 13-Haru-13 on May 20th, 2010, 7:36 pm





 
to 13-Haru-13 ( Reply )

I don't see where you see Mapa-Rupi, but okay.

posted by Data2048 on May 22nd, 2010, 2:12 pm



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